Monday, January 24, 2011

Lines 1 - Winter

My first poem :

Its all white around making me shiver,
White snow falling forever.
City angelic as ever,
Car speed slow as never.
Gone are all leaves from trees,
With snow making everything freeze.
With the temperature low,
Seems life is moving slow.
Coffee steam clear,
Hugs and kisses for dear!

When I shared it to read,the response I got was :
Good one. Did you write on your own or did you copy from some where?

So me being in all poetic mood that day replied as below :

All my words are real,
None are surreal.
I write my mind,
With my heart kind.
I copy from none,
Except one:
Thats my heart!

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